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Differences in Writing Historical vs. Contemporary

Writing in different time periods can be both fun and challenging as an author.  There are some key differences between writing contemporary novels and writing historical novels.

 

Language

How did people speak?  What sayings did they use?  Slang?  Did they use long, complex sentence structures and flowery language?

To understand how people spoke for my historical novels, I spent some time reading firsthand accounts of events of the day.  Reading someone’s diary from the mid-1860’s gives you a good idea of the complex sentence structures used during the time frame.  Once I have a good understanding, I try to incorporate some aspects of the language into the novel.  Since I want to be careful not to alienate modern audiences, I make some style choices, like using contractions even though they didn’t.

With a contemporary novel, it’s easier.  You already know how people talk.  True, you might have to do some research for a specific regional dialect or slang.  But, for the most part, you live and breathe the language nuances every day.

Mindset

What is the prevailing mindset of the timeframe?  Were there different attitudes and thoughts towards different ethnic groups?  Were women seen differently?  Men?

One of the things I did to better understand the mindset from the 1860’s was to pick up books specifically on the attitudes in the West.  I found this great resource that explained a key gender difference on the wagon trains west.  Men marked the journey by miles and women marked it by the number of roadside grave markers.  That’s a very different mindset than what we experience today.

Today’s mindset is probably engrained in your own attitudes and outlook on life.  Even if your views differ from that of your character, you have a good idea of what is generally socially acceptable.  Things, like harassment in the work place or racial slurs, are considered socially unacceptable.  This will likely take little to no research for a more contemporary work.

Technology

What modes of transportation were used?  What would a typical household kitchen contain?  How did people heat their homes or get water to drink?

If you’re writing a contemporary novel, chances are you already have a good idea of the answers to these questions.  In my kitchen, I have a blender, microwave, stove, coffee maker, electric can opener, etc.

For a historical novel, these are all things to research to add depth and flavor to your novel.  One of my favorite kitchen finds of all time was something called a meat juice press (I even have pictures!!).  In the 1800’s, a common way to treat cold symptoms was extract the juice from a piece of meat by pressing it with this device (very different from beef broth).  Many homes had one.  So, in my current WIP, I incorporate this little nugget into the story.

 

Language, mindset, and technology are just a few examples of the differences to research for historical novels that you may already know for a more contemporary work.  I hope this gives you some ideas on how to improve research for historical novels and encourage you to add that same spice to your contemporary works.

Emotionless Pricing

Pricing for indie authors shouldn’t be an emotional task.  Yet, for many of us it is.

Is my price too high?  Is it too low?  Should I bump it up because I’m getting a bunch of sales right now?  Should I lower it because I haven’t moved a book in weeks?  These are the questions that keep us up at night.

Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we could take the worry and stress out of pricing?

The good news is:  You can.

My Philosophy on Pricing

Pick a price and ride the wave.  In a nutshell, that’s my philosophy on pricing.  But, there’s more to it than that.  In an article called Pricing Strategy, I give some methodical approaches on how to determine a price and what factors play into pricing.

But, today I want to look at another aspect: How often should you change the price of your book?  Just because you can change price whenever you want, doesn’t mean that you should.  Avoid the temptation to make frequent price changes.

Starting Out Low

If you are a new author and you are trying to get your name out there, it makes perfect sense to start with a lower promotional price.  But, train your brain to think of it as exactly that:  a promotional price.

The reality is that many authors start out with a low price and they just keep it there, afraid to upset the apple cart and lose sales.  If I move from $0.99 to $2.99, I’m scared that I won’t sell any more books.

Selling Less Can Make You More

While you could sell fewer books at a higher price, you have to ask yourself:  Is that really a bad thing?  Consider this:

If you sell 100 books at $0.99 at 35% royalties, your total royalties = $34.65.

If you sell only 25 books at $2.99 at 70% royalties, your total royalties = $52.32.

If you sell only 25 books at $5.99 at 70% royalties, your total royalties = $104.82.

Is this making sense?  Do you see how you can make more money by selling fewer books?  What if we add an extra zero onto the equation?

1000 at $0.99 at 35% royalty = $346.50

250 at $2.99 at 70% royalty = $523.25

250 at $5.99 at 70% royalty = $1,048.25

Now we’re talking.  I could certainly use another grand.  How about you?

Let’s think even bigger for a second.  What would happen if you signed up for KDP Select.  Then you had a few free days.  Following those free days you hit your marketing outlets (blog, social media, whatever) with lots of activity to keep the momentum going.  What if you priced your book at $5.99 and actually sold 1,000 copies?

Can you say:  $4,193.00 royalty check?  I can.

Tying It All Together

See, when we focus so much on the number of books sold versus the number and price combination, we can make emotional decisions.  We can decide to drop our price to $0.99 to move more books so we can feel better.  Or, we think we’re on an upswing, so we lower the price so we can sell even more.  What really happens is that we end up leaving money on the table because of fear or a lack of self confidence.

Indie authors:  Be bold.  Take a look at the big picture.  Avoid making emotional decisions about pricing.  Consider how both price and number of books sold can play together to help you achieve your financial goals with your writing career.

 

Self-published author, Karen Baney, enjoys sharing information to help authors learn about the Business of Writing.  She holds a Masters of Business Administration from Arizona State University and has worked in various business related career fields for the past 20 years.  She writes Christian Historical Fiction and Contemporary Romance novels.  For more information about Karen’s books, visit her Amazon Page and for more great articles by Karen, visit her articles page.

500 Books in 12 Hours

Sales UpHuh?  Is it possible for an indie author to sell 500 books in 12 hours?

The answer is yes.  On Dec. 6th, my novel, A Dream Unfolding, appeared on Ereader News Today’s Bargain Kindle Book list.  This website accepts $0.99 books that have a rating of 4.0 or higher on Amazon.  I initially submitted the request toward the end of October, so it takes some time to get in the queue.

But the results were well worth it.  For $25, I sold 500 copies of A Dream Unfolding in 12 hours.

That’s not all.  During the first 24 hours after my book first appeared, it shot to #1 on Amazon’s Kindle Best Seller list in Religious Fiction.  It also shot up to #165 on Amazon’s over all Kindle Best Seller list.  This was huge!  Never before had this title reached such amazing heights.

Another great perk of climbing so high on the Amazon best sellers list is that my book started appearing more and more when customers purchased similar books in related genres.  You know:  Customers who bought this book, also bought…

What’s the moral of this story?  You can market effectively for very little cost.  If you do a little digging, sometimes you’ll find a gem like Ereader News Today.  I first learned about them from an author community that I belong to online.

OpenMindNot every opportunity will pay off this big.  But, with a little effort, you can find low cost or free marketing avenues online that help get your book in front of readers.  Just think outside the box.

 

To learn more about Ereader News Today, visit: http://ereadernewstoday.com/an-opportunity-for-authors-to-promote-their-books-at-ent/ 

 

Self-published author, Karen Baney, enjoys sharing information to help authors learn about the Business of Writing.  She holds a Masters of Business Administration from Arizona State University and has worked in various business related career fields for the past 20 years.  She writes Christian Historical Fiction and Contemporary Romance novels.  For more information about Karen’s books, visit her Amazon Page.

 

 

Writing Stories of Faith… Mingled with Murder & Mayhem

Lillian DuncanToday, author Lillian Duncan joins me to discuss the dynamics of writing faith based suspense novels.  Lillian’s novels are suspense with a touch of romance.  She believes books can be entertaining and uplifting at the same time.  For over thirty years, she has worked as a speech-language pathologist in the Cleveland Municipal School district.  Most of her students are deaf or hard-of-hearing.  As a writer, speech pathologist, and an educator, she believes in the power of words to change lives, especially God’s Word.

swirl_flourish_inverted_hi_MedWriting stories of faith… mingled with murder and mayhem.

Really? Christian Fiction and murder/suspense novels. On the surface the two don’t seem to go together. After all, how can a book where murders, mayhem, and bad guys abound promote Christian values?

Oooh. Oooh. My hand’s raised. I know the answer to the question. Pick me. Pick me.

Real life isn’t all sweetness and fluff. It would be nice if it was, but, alas, it’s not. Life can be difficult, sometimes because of our choices and sometimes through no fault of our own. Jesus even warns us that we will have troubles.

So, that’s what I do. I write about the troubles—the more trouble the better. Then I show my characters learning and growing from their adversity. I show their faith becoming stronger in spite of the difficult circumstances they find themselves in.

How do I pick the spiritual message of my story?

I don’t usually know what the spiritual message is when I begin writing a new novel, but that’s not surprising to me. I am what they call a seat of the pants type writer, meaning I don’t outline and I don’t know what’s going to happen from one moment to the other in my story. That’s what makes writing fun for me!  I may have an idea where the story is going but it’s always subject to change.

For example in my new book, when I started writing DECEPTION all I knew was that the main character (Patti) was estranged from her twin sister to the point of not knowing she had a niece. I didn’t know why they were estranged, but once I discovered that the missing twin was the reason Patti’s wedding was canceled years earlier, the theme of forgiveness quickly took root as part of the story.

Most of the time the spiritual message of my book slowly reveals itself as I learn more about my characters and their lives. Sometimes, it’s only a whisper in the first draft but it gets stronger with each subsequent draft.

Jesus used stories to teach Biblical truths. We call them parables. He knew that people naturally respond to a story and are willing to learn from someone else’s problems rather than an in-your-face approach.

When readers identify with the characters of the book, they feel their joy, their hope, and their pain. If they feel Patti’s despair about not forgiving someone she loved when she had the chance, they might decide to call that mother, brother, or friend they’ve been angry at for some time.

At least, that’s my hope.

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To celebrate the release of her new suspense novel-DECEPTION, Lillian is having a great contest on her website with a Nook as the grand prize along with other cool prizes. No purchase necessary, visit:www.lillianduncan.net for the details.

 

Deception by Lillian Duncan
Twins are supposed to have an unbreakable bond, but Patti and Jamie have serious relationship issues. They haven’t spoken since Jamie ruined Patti’s upcoming nuptials years ago.

When a niece she knows nothing about telephones, Patti must unravel the yarn of Jamie’s life and her mysterious disappearance.

Detective Carter Caldwell takes his job seriously, and it’s his job to keep Patti and her niece safe. But Patti is determined to help find her sister.

As the investigation grows more dangerous, Carter begrudgingly admits the safest place for Patti is at his side. Each step in their journey leads them closer to the truth but pulls them further down a road filled with danger and deception, where each will battle for survival and the lives of countless Americans.

 

Research Tips and Tricks at Museums

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My husband and I recently took a nice long weekend trip to Tucson, Arizona.  As with most of our vacations, we worked in a trip to a few museums.  I love walking into museums, smelling that old musty smell of things long past.

Then reality hits.  I mean, I’m standing in the largest aircraft museum in the country.  I could spend days here.  How am I ever going to gather all of the information I need in one short afternoon without testing my husband’s patience?

Normally, I’m armed with my Nikon D50 and a notepad.  I take hundreds of pictures and make notes (as long as the museum permits picture taking).  But this time, I brought something extra.  My iPhone and this neat little app called EverNote.

Several times throughout the day, I snapped a few pictures with my iPhone, saving the shot directly into EverNote.  I added a few quick notes and viola!  My research notes were instantly uploaded to my account and available from my laptop, phone, and even my desktop sitting at home.

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By the end of the trip, I found myself getting into a groove.  If there were long text descriptions of something that I wanted to capture to read later, I used my iPhone.  If I wanted the highest quality picture of an object, like the WWII airplanes, I used my Nikon and added a few notes to my paper notepad.  I always jot down the picture number beside the note.

At the end of each day, I allotted an hour in the hotel room to organize the day’s notes.  I loaded the pictures from my Nikon to my laptop.  I went through my notepad and typed up the notes directly into EverNote.  Now, when I’m ready to write my WWII series, all my notes are neatly organized and extremely accessible.  I don’t have to try to remember what drawer I stuffed them in.

My tips for researching at a museum:

1. Take lots of pictures.

2. Bring a notepad.

3. Always write down the picture number and a brief note in the notepad for the pictures you’re taking.

4. Find ways to use your smart phone to work more efficiently on research trips.

5. Do a quick review of your notes at the end of each day.  You’ll remember things you forgot to write down and you’ll capture them while they are fresh.

 

Self-published author, Karen Baney, enjoys sharing information to help authors learn about the Business of Writing.  She holds a Masters of Business Administration from Arizona State University and has worked in various business related career fields for the past 20 years.  She writes Christian Historical Fiction and Contemporary Romance novels.  For more information about Karen’s books, visit her Amazon Page.

Writing Faith In Fiction

As a Christian author, many times we find our story leads to writing some spiritual element, be it prayer, a conversion, bible study, or church attendance.  Nothing turns a reader off more than if the spiritual elements feel preachy or forced.

So how can a writer make these aspects of faith flow naturally in the story?  Here are a few tips that I follow when writing:

Remember to keep the faith element consistent with the character’s point of view (POV). 

In my novel, Nickels, Niki Turner is not a Christian.  When she attends church for the first time, she doesn’t feel comfortable.  She takes in what is going on and wonders why some things about the church service are the way they are.  She misses some of what’s happening because, after the message, she’s frustrated that she doesn’t have the answers she was seeking.  Instead she has more questions than before.

If I were to write the same scene from her roommate’s POV, a Christian since the age of 12, the scene would be very different.  She would be excited that the band played her favorite song—one that lets her really worship God.  The message may have resonated with her differently.  She might have felt God pulling her to deal with a certain area of her heart.  She might leave the service feeling refreshed and thankful.

So, the church experience was different because the characters were different.  Their hearts were in a different place.  Their perspective stayed in line with who they are.

Not every story will have a conversion.

This is hard, especially for newer Christian fiction writers.  We want to share the story of God’s love.  We want readers to grasp the significance of entrusting their lives to Christ and living forgiven and free.

Yet, not every story leads to this place.  Sometimes main characters are already Christians and they may be struggling with their faith.  Perhaps they are dealing with a sin issue or struggling to trust God.  Throwing in a minor character that gets converted, just so we can relay the gospel message usually comes across as forced.  Readers can see right through it.

If you have any doubts about whether or not the story should include a conversion, first seek God’s opinion on the matter.  If you feel like you’re not hearing from Him on this, then seek the counsel of a close friend or fellow Christian writer.

Don’t preach to the reader.

Nothing turns me off more than when I’m reading a book and I feel the author is pushing their views to me the reader.  I’ve been known to stop reading a novel if it feels like the author is talking to the reader instead of the characters talking or working through something on their own.

In some ways, this ties back to my first point.  If you keep everything in the context of the character’s POV, you can usually avoid this feeling.

Here’s an example of what I’m talking about:

Little Susie walks into her mom’s bedroom.  “Mom, why did Jesus die?”

“Well, he died so your sins could be forgiven and that you could go to heaven and be with him… [full lengthy description of the salvation message].”

Susie hugged her mom.  “Thanks mom.  I want to be with Jesus when I die.”

When would this scene make sense?  Perhaps, if the author shows little Susie’s struggle for a chapter or two, wondering about who Jesus is or why her mom always takes her to church, then it might fit.

Where this would not make sense is if this scene came out of the blue.  Susie never had a thought about this before.  She never expressed any curiosity to her mom before now.  Even worse would be if this was the end of the discussion or change in Susie.  Suddenly, Susie becomes the perfect daughter.

The author may have described the salvation message, but if it leaves a bad taste in the reader’s mouth because it came entirely out of context, then is it really having the desired impact?

Keep your heart focused on God and pray over your work.

Remember, God can use anything that an author writes—especially when the author is seeking to do His will.  Maybe God will use your novel to give someone hope after suffering grief.  Maybe he’ll use it to heal a broken heart.  Maybe he’ll use it to bring someone to him.  Or maybe he’ll use it to be a breath of fresh air for a harried soul.

Let Him determine how to use the words he’s given you without forcing a message that doesn’t belong in the story.

 

Self-published author, Karen Baney, enjoys sharing information to help authors learn about the Business of Writing.  She holds a Masters of Business Administration from Arizona State University and has worked in various business related career fields for the past 20 years.  She writes Christian Historical Fiction and Contemporary Romance novels.  For more information about Karen’s books, visit her Amazon Page.

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